Wow, this was a great piece with an important message. I knew deep down that I was wasting my time, but it took someone else to really drive it home. Thanks you.
Critically speaking, The art was appealing, the composition of shots were decent, and the animation was somewhat limited, but served its purpose. The writing was the strongest aspect of this, but if I had to improve something, I would work a bit more on the mouth movements. Overall, I'd say well done, sir.
Also, with all the memes that constantly make front page, this just proves that Tom Fulp lurks.
I love every aspect of this cartoon. Even the parts that were bad were done like that intentionally. While everything was done well, the voice acting and animation were what really pulled this animation together. Good work and I hope to see more in the future!
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